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Urban Road

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Road by my house
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Hey again buddy a new crit for you.

Vsion: it was a good choice to take the picture of the road and have a hill at the end of it. it makes it look more endless. the mailboxes are sort of spooky and it just adds to the mystery of this picture. the snow is noting less then gorgeous. the name of "cody anderson photography" i feel like it takes away from the picture. it sort of takes my eye away from the main picture. i understand you want the audience to know the company name, but dont let that take away from the whole picture.

Originality: i always hate criting this one cause it is sort of stupid but. this is the unknown road picture that is pretty generic. yes there is probably no other pic of this area but it still is the same sort of pic.

Technique: it may be the camera you used or you may have done it yourself. I feel like there is a blur on the sides of the rode. i feel like this makes me feel like i am moving and i sort of felt like this picture should be like the view of a man standing. and be able to see all the things very clearly with less blur.

Impact: i always loved these type of pictures it is sort of spooky but at the same time a view of what life is. its a slippery road that you may slip and fall down but you need to get up so you can keep going, but don't sprint down the road of life or you will miss the beautiful scenes around you.

I hope this helps
love ya